Text hooks: what the on-screen words are for
On-screen text is read before anything is heard. Treat it as a headline for a silent viewer, not a caption of what you are saying.
A large share of viewers meet your video with the sound off. For them, on-screen text is not a supplement. It is the entire opening.
This changes what the text is for. It is not a transcript of your first line. It is a headline aimed at someone who has heard nothing.
One idea, few words
Opening text is read in a glance, not studied. A sentence that runs to three lines will not be finished before the decision is made.
Aim for something that can be taken in at a single look — a handful of words carrying one clear idea. If you need a second line, the idea is probably two ideas.
Do not duplicate the spoken hook
If your text says exactly what you are about to say, you have wasted one of them. The sound-off viewer gets one message; the sound-on viewer gets the same message twice.
Better: let the text carry the claim and the voice carry the detail, or let the text name who the video is for while the voice starts the content. Two complementary channels, not one in stereo.
Make it readable in the feed
Text that looks fine in the editor frequently fails in the wild. Light grey text on a bright background, thin fonts, words sitting over a busy part of the image — all legible on a laptop, all invisible on a phone in daylight.
Use a heavy weight, high contrast, and a background plate or shadow behind the letters if the footage underneath is busy. Then shrink the preview and check it again.
Keep it out of the furniture
Every platform lays its own interface over your video: captions, usernames, descriptions, buttons. Text placed low or along one side can end up partly hidden, and you will not see it in your editor.
Keep the opening text in the middle band of the frame, away from the edges. It is the one zone no platform covers.
Leave it up long enough
Text that appears and disappears in under a second reads as a flicker. The viewer registers that something was there and feels they missed it, which is irritating rather than intriguing.
Read it aloud at a normal pace, twice. That is roughly how long it should stay.
Captions are a separate job
The opening text hook and the running captions have different purposes. The hook is a headline that sells the video. The captions make the rest of it followable in silence.
Both are worth doing. Neither replaces the other — and auto-generated captions should always be read through once, because they are reliably wrong on exactly the words that matter most to you: names, places, products.
Visual hooks: making the first frame make sense
The opening image is a decision point, not an introduction. What is on screen in the first second decides whether there is a second.
Spoken hooks: the first line out of your mouth
Your first sentence has one job — to make the second sentence worth hearing. Most beginners spend it on a greeting.
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